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Monday 5 August 2013

Hansel and Gretel

Every picture tells a story. Retell this Fairytale in your own words. Think about: where the story is set Who the characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel the problem and how it is solved The order of your events and how they are linked. Remember to: choose your words carefully take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work. Once upon a time there was two kids named hansel and gretel and an old woodcutter with a nagging wife . hansel and gretel were brother and sister they always look after each one another . But one day something happened to them but what the nagging wife did first she said there is not enough food for us all we should get rid of those kids The (the Dad) woodcutter looked unafraid but apparently he was afraid so he dropped of his kids at a place that was unknown . And now they had to try and survive in the woods when suddenly there was a candy house that they approached they both knew what they were going to do they really hungry because Hansel and Gretel had not eaten in awhile so they were desperate SO THEY...... Ate the house and then there was a witch who had walked from the woods and apparently the candy house was hers and she came and said to the children stay stay you will be good for tea . So they and ate ate ate ate ate until Hansel and Gretel were fat so the witch tried to cook them but it did not work somehow they managed to escape . They got out of the house and they were free and they were both crying and wished they had there dad . they were lost they had no food and no shelter BUT THEN ….... . there dad the woodcutter found them and said your mother has dided I would like to take care of you now and promise I will never leave you again.

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