Paragraph for Michigan

Here is a paragraph about me that I wrote for Miss Hart’s grade 3 students in Michigan  


Fakalofa lahiatu my name is Taimana and i was born in Auckland, New Zealand my favourite subject is sport.

My favourite nrl (national rugby league) team is the West Tigers the person on that team who inspires me is Benji Marshall. One day I want to be an amazing athlete like him.


My cultures Niuaen, Moari and Pakeha If you ever come to New Zealand places you should go to the Sky Tower where you can bungee jump and see the best view of Auckland you should  also visit Rainbow’s end because it is amusement park with a variety roller coasters and scary rides I love playing with my friends.


Christmas I love because it is a good day to celebrate Christ and I’m looking forward to the  school holidays which follows to Christmas.

Writing paragraghs

Taimana wrote a paragraph about his walk to school. Then he got a small group of friends and the teacher to help him "re-think" his sentences. After brainstorming different ways to add details and stronger vocabulary....this is the finished product.

I am Taimana

I am Taimana, and this is my very own blog